Thursday, December 14, 2006

Good evening everybody and thanks for your comments, criticisms and compliments.

I feel the need to respond to some of the questions and comments raised in previous posts so let me begin:

1. The guy Michael shot was just some anonymous street dealer. Just someone who Marlo wanted killed no doubt cause he had some nice real estate. And no, I did not notice what Butchie said to Omar when he handed him the money. Butchie has good lines though so I bet it was funny. What did he say?

God I would love to get my hands on a Wire script!

2. Curious about the media season as well. Cops, drug dealing, teaching I know nothing about. The media and writing for newspapers I do, so I will be especially interested in this one.

I think it will be about how the media influences the public, for better and, this being the Wire, mostly for worse. It will probably follow some beat reporter who follows Carcetti and ends up becoming part of the problem. Maybe they get co-opted and become Carcetti's parrot, a sort of Judith Miller of Baltimore

Don't know much about the Baltimore Sun. It ain't what it was in Mencken's day, that's for sure.

3. Yes, the scene at the Arboretum was amazing, brilliant. I wish I could get the transcript for it.

I did not notice the change in light at the end of the scene. I'll have to watch it again. And yeah, good notice on that line of Bodie's, "It's nice." You almost never heard somebody from his world make a comment on the weather. Nice to see him let down his guard. Sad to see him go.

4. I think Parenti is a hero because he gets his hands dirty. The man leaves his comfortable College Park office and gets down into a gritty inner city school to see what goes down. He's trying to effect societal change. He doesn't look heroic or is particularly dramatic but he's trying to effect change in the way that he knows how.
He is taking a risk.

In terms of future postings, I'll see what I can do. I guess I'm just not sure what to write about having no real inside source at HBO. "The Wire" may take place in Baltimore but it's really about urban America. And I'm fascinated by urban America, not the least cause I live in it (San Francisco) and am always eagerly reading articles about trends and ideas in the big city.

Not surprisingly, one of my favorite non-fiction writers these days is a man named Joel Kotkin who's an urban historian. He's written some great articles about the current state of American cities. He lives in LA and he's always raking San Francisco and he has good criticisms. You can find his latest one at www.democracyjournal.org. It's about "the boutique city" and how cities are bending over backwards to try and appear cool. He writes that cities today, instead of trying to cater to the middle class and build communities centered around families and education are instead trying to make their cities "cool and hip" so that young people will wanna move there. He says the strategy is foolish. That's it in a nutshell. He brings up Baltimore.

There's also a great article by Richard Florida in the Atlantic Monthly about how people with college educations are congregating in fewer and fewer places.

Well, I find these things interesting at least.

I'll try and post something here in the future.....

Thanks to all you readers who make this blog worth it!

Happy holidays,

Andy

PS. Does anybody have an mp3 of the Season Four song? I want it and I can't find it anywhere on the Internet. It's so great. Thanks.

Monday, December 11, 2006




Final Grades

“They gonna study your study! When do things change?” - Colvin
“This game is rigged.” – Bodie

Another gripping episode, compelling to watch from start to finish. The episode kept up a brisk pace, exhibited some interesting directorial flourishes, and contained some surprises. It was a worthy coronation for one of the best seasons of any show ever.

“Final Grades,” however, did not possess the finality that previous season finales did. Unlike the strong endings we saw in the finales to seasons Two and Three, the Season Four finale closed a few plotlines but opened up lots of new ones. And it did not resolve many of the open plotlines. What happens to the revenge of Officer Walker? Are Chris and Snoop going to jail? How does Carcetti solve the school budget problem? How will Bodie’s death impact McNulty’s policing?

By contrast, seasons Two and Three had much stronger endings. With Stringer dead and Barksdale sent to jail, the whole Barksdale plotline was effectively over and the Hamsterdam experiment was junked. The entire world of the docks was put to rest and concluded at the end of Season Two. Season Four, by contrast, gives our characters new beginnings but not too many endings. This IS NOT a criticism, I’m just pointing out the differences between this season and the others, which largely stand on their own.

“Final Grades” seemed more interested in setting up Season Five than concluding the story arcs for the characters we met this season. But since this show is so fricking amazing, and the new characters so vivid, that is just fine. It will have to tide us over till next September, or whenever the execs at HBO will decide to bequeath us with Season Five, aka the “media season.”

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The episode was penned by David Simon and after reading his interview on Slate last week, I could see some of his views on display here.

The theme most prevalent on “Final Grades” was pride, its costs and benefits, and particularly how pride relates to work. Pride as a double-edged sword. It brings out the best in people like McNulty, Colvin, Daniels and Lester, causes them to dig deep in themselves and bring out the best in others. But pride also causes Bodie to turn his corner into his own Little Bighorn, and it looks like it might begin to unravel Carcetti as he sacrifices his constituents’ needs for his ambitions for Governor. (let’s remember that Carcetti is modeled after current Baltimore Mayor O’Malley – somebody who Simon has made negative comments about).

Remember Daniels’ line to Carver (I believe it was Season One), “you gotta decide if it’s about you or about the work.” Carver, after some hesitation, saw that it was about the work. To Bodie and Omar, who both show themselves to be consummate professionals in this episode, it’s about the work. To Lester, it is about the work as well. Rawls, it’s about him. And Carcetti, we’re starting to see, it’s about him too.

“Omar ain’t no drug dealer,” the stick-up boy says as he extorts Prop Joe for some “her-o-an” paying the fat man for his clock that baffles everyone in the electronics store. Prop Joe refuses to give up Cheese to a pissed off Marlo. “I can’t do that,” he says. “That’s my sister’s boy.” Even in the bottom-line obsessed world of early 21st century America where as Simon insists, “people are worth less everyday” we see the strong residues of pride intact… but not everybody lives to tell about it.

And then there’s people letting go of their pride for the best. Wee-Bey letting Colvin take his son in being the best example of this.

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My favorite scene, and easily one of the best this season was McNulty and Bodie at the Arboretum. Screenwriting classes should study that scene over and over again. It was just brilliant. McNulty reinforces Bodie’s own thoughts of himself, “You’re a soldier Bodie.” He says this without irony. Through the game of cops and robbers they’ve come to know each other in an unorthodox way. It’s something that Landsman displays – a bit grudgingly perhaps – to Bubbles.

And McNulty also challenges him. “Somebody’s got to step up,” he tells the young slinger. It is a call that goes unanswered. In a parallel world, it would have been interesting to see Bodie survive into Season Five and attempt to answer this call. Become another stick-up boy like Omar or try and go clean like Cutty. Just at the point when we see him become self-conscious about the world he lives in and look at his world with new eyes, he gets shot.

While it is a shame to see Bodie go, this leftover from the Barksdale days, let’s also avoid the temptation to canonize him. He comes across as valiant this season but he often exhibited a self-serving sense of justice, justifying his murder of Wallace with Poot but decrying that of Little Kevin. He is a victim of a system he was himself complicit in. As we see all along in “The Wire” individuals get chewed up by the system they belong to, their sense of morality becomes distorted into something so nakedly self-serving that they end up lying to themselves and ultimately they don’t really know which way is up anymore. At this point, to borrow a phrase from Bunk last episode, “black is white and right is left.”

But he’s right, Marlo is evil. He seemed cool and above the fray earlier in the season - just purely a businessman. But he’s disintegrated before our eyes into just another cold-blooded thug. There’s nothing particularly benevolent about the man, save his handouts for school clothes and books we saw at the beginning of the season. He is the raw, ruthless, no-holds-barred businessman who doesn’t live by any rules. He’s all about the bottom line and is representative of something “The Wire” has taken an interest in: the triumph of people like Marlo who fail to live by rules and how this dehumanizes themselves and those around them.

Even Chris questions him. When Marlo tells him to take out Bodie he doesn’t immediately understand telling his boss he may not have talked. “Doesn’t matter, we gotta send a message,” Marlo says. There’s no trust, no focus on relationships, just money. Anything is legitimate to him since he has no code and little pride. He’s cut off from anything traditional. No surprise this man don’t like Town Cars.

That is why his interaction with Vondas was so interesting. This quiet, physically unimposing old world man who runs his business based on trust – and Marlo can’t really understand it at all. But that’s just him reacting to his own world.

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An interesting, inauspicious start to the episode considering all the other things going on. Landsman has always been a pretty minor character. We rarely see him out of the homicide office cradling his Jugs magazine and shaking his head at all the red ink on the board. But behind the clearance rate obsessed bureaucrat we some humanity. It comes out clumsily at first, “What’s in your head fella?” but we see a notable change in his character. He goes from “don’t pull down any more fucking wood,” to “fuck the clearance rate” in the span of barely one episode. Nice.

Poor Bubbles. He has effectively cried “uncle” to the streets. I’m surprised it didn’t happen sooner. Andre Royo does such a fantastic job with this character. He is amazing. He is Bubbles.

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Once again, I have to laud the direction of Ernest Dickerson. The man has an expressionistic touch that the other directors don’t utilize. The direction on “The Wire” always strikes me as adequate and functional, nothing extraordinary or creative. Again, it’s the writing and the acting and the scope of the subject matter that make this show what it is.

But Dickerson is different. The man likes long, long shots. How long did the camera stay on Bodie’s dead body? On the gutter where Monk dumped Michael’s gun? On the tranquil street corner that Namond now calls home? He wants us to ponder, he wants us to look more deeply into what we’re seeing. For a show with so much rapid dialogue, these shots really stand out.

Another shot that stood out was of the one of Carcetti in his red chair after he rejects the Governor’s money. For the first time, he doesn’t look right. He looks isolated and a little evil amid all that red leather. You can’t make out his face too well when he’s sitting in that chair. He has changed, calculating the risks to his future power rather than take a bailout for the schools. But you knew this was going to happen. His ambition and the demands of political campaigning did the switch.

A great shot of Michael in the back of the SUV. You can’t really see his face, you have no idea what he’s feeling. But you can feel Chris’ eyes on him as he tells him the importance of looking a guy in the eyes when you shoot him. It’s eerie and very effective. You have no idea what Michael will become, but it doesn’t look good.

And a great montage of scenes after Michael performs his first murder. Very skillful.

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Before discussing the ending, I want to bring up my favorite quote about endings. David Lynch said, “Endings can be beautiful things but only if they leave room to dream.” I think that the closing image does that. It passes the Lynchian litmus test.

The last scene of the episode was sublime. Donut rides up in his latest find and Namond smiles but lets him ride away. They don’t talk to each other. They’re not on the same page no more. He looks out at a quiet and pristine corner in Baltimore. You can hear the wind blowing, the wind chimes making noise. It’s a picture of urban peace and quiet. And the camera stays there forever. The perspective of the camera is interesting. We’re not seeing that corner through Namond’s eyes necessarily. He may have gone back inside. The shot confirms what the show is in its raw form really about…. Baltimore.

But what does it mean exactly? This is what cities should look like? This is what a child needs to thrive? Hmmmmmmm…

Still, as far as a closing image to a season, I didn’t think it was as powerful or as profound as Nick Sobotka looking through the chain-link fence at the harbor knowing that his uncle was murdered. Looking at him walking away and running his hand on the fence, I’ll remember that.

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And what can one say about the middle-schoolers? We have one successful intervention (Namond) and one botched intervention (Randy). And with Dookie and Michael, they don’t really have any choices. They become what society expects of them. They don’t choose their own path.

Randy falls through the cracks. I liked the scene where an impassioned Carver practically begs the social services worker to get Randy in. She wears a serious expression above her silly outfit. And all she can say is the bureaucratic standard, “the list is the list.” If Cheese is Randy’s father, than Prop Joe is his great uncle. But in a community this broken, no one even knows this. Or maybe they do, they just don’t care.

Michael. He’s on his way. But he’s really doing this for his family, for Bug. But it seems like he’s slowly falling into the trap that success breeds, kind of like Carcetti.

That’s something we saw a lot of in this episode. People trying to save others: McNulty and Bodie, Carver and Randy, Colvin and Namond, Landsman and Bubbles in a bumbling sort of way. Half the time, it’s the institutions that get in the way.

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So I suppose the question on every body’s tongue is, how does this season stack up against the others? Tough call since every season has been compelling and first-rate. However, I would make the call that this one takes the gold. Why? Because for the first time, the show has genuine heroes in the middle-schoolers. Sure we rooted for McNulty and some of the other cops in the past and maybe some of the more conscious and sensitive people on the street like Wallace or D’Angelo but the middle-schoolers gave us something that previous seasons had lacked – an innocent and uncorrupted presence.

David Simon has said that “’The Wire’ is not about good and evil” but I find that sentiment suspect given the evidence this season. We see the boys, surely no angels, becoming victimized by their own environments. By creating characters whom the audience ends up rooting for, Simon and Burns created an emotional focal point. They’re presence roots the show, especially since so many characters, from Prez to Colvin revolve around the kids. With the exception of Dookie, the kids all had strong plotlines (I know some of you disagree with me over that but Dookie’s character did not encounter the same, firm set of challenges and plot obstacles that Namond, Randy and Michael did.)

Carcetti was also a great character as we got more into the political life in the city. Omar faced real tribulations and looked scared for the first time. I could go on and on, but I’ll stop here.


And as always, random comments:

- The guy next to Cutty watching “Deadwood,” “Ha, he called him cocksucker.” You can’t say they were plugging the show cause it’s basically done.
- Scene with Carcetti and his wife was interesting. She looked horrible. She looked scared. And they weren’t really communicating with each other. It’s all about him now and power.
- Great to see Vondas back. He’s a great character. I like how they brought back in Season Two. An old world man in a place like Baltimore. What he said to Marlo, “I look into the soul” of his driver… that’s exactly what Bush said when he was asked what he thought about Putin.
- I liked Colvin’s line to Parenti when they get in the elevator at City Hall: “They gonna study your study! When do things change?” He’s a great character. And seeing him storm out of Parenti’s class was instructive too. But Parenti is a hero here.
- Every post I've read today on "Final Grades" on the Internet lauds Bodie's line about feeling like "them little bitches on the chessboard." Yes, that was great.

Well, season’s over now so I suppose this is my last post. Thanks to everybody for reading and for commenting. I may post something here if I think it’s of interest to Wire watchers in the future.

My email address is asywak@gmail.com if you'd like to drop a line.

Monday, December 04, 2006



That’s Got His Own

“I kept you in Nikes since you was in Diapers.” – Namond’s Mom, aka “The Dragon Lady”
“Mike ain’t Mike no more.” - Namond

Wow. Just amazing. This episode floored me. The action in this season has ratcheted up considerably in recent episodes. Like “The Sopranos,” the second to last episode of the season, not the last episode, has always been the most action packed on “The Wire.” “That’s Got His Own” did not disappoint.

I did a little research: in all four seasons, the second to last episode was penned by George Pelecanos, a D.C. native and crime novelist. He’s written some of my favorite episodes, the one where Stringer Bell was shot, where Sobotka is lured to the water by the Greek and subsequently killed and where Daniels tells Burrell (in one of my all-time favorite lines from this show), “You’d rather stand in shit than have someone see you swing a shovel.” He did an equally good job on this script.

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Let’s all remember Wee-Bey’s advice to his son in prison earlier this year, “Either you for real nigga or you ain’t.” It mirrors Daniels’ question to Carcetti, “How for real are you?” That’s what this episode was about and to a certain extent what “The Wire” is about: who’s for real and who isn’t? Who is willing to put, as Michael says, “somethin’ real behind your words.”

Carcetti is for real. He goes and “begs his Republican ass” the governor for school money and then smiles as he has to eat another bowl of shit when even the icy Madame Washington tells him, “I’m glad I’m not the Mayor,” before telling him she’s gonna go after him no matter what he decides. Carcetti, modeled in many ways after the current Baltimore mayor and governor-elect of Maryland, Martin O’Malley, has been a joy to watch this season.

From afar, being the mayor of a major American city and calling the shots looks to be an envious job full of all sorts of perks and privileges. But you watch Carcetti this season, and it all looks like one gigantic headache followed by another. You constantly have to make deals with unsavory people (Clay Davis) and make policy compromises that will demonize you to a chunk of the population. You constantly have to watch your back for ambitious opponents (Washington) and prostrate yourself for the right people (the Governor).

The man’s gonna have a head full of gray hairs in no time.

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Lester and Daniels are for real and triumph. You never witness either of these men in a negative light. They’re the public sector heroes – representing what is possible in government when it functions competently and passionately about protecting the public.

“Being for real” though is also Wee-Bey behind bars for life. Cutty and Bubbles provide a further cautionary tale about the consequences of stepping up to the plate. Bubbles ends up killing his quasi-adopted son and Cutty’s life is only spared by Michael’s outstretched arm.

His reformation from Barksdale muscle to youth savior was pretty dramatic but the man’s lack of a sense of pragmatism almost proved fatal. All season along, hell all series long, we’ve seen it’s the pragmatists and those willing to make compromises on their values that end up getting ahead. It’s Machiavelli in the inner city.

Namond, of course, is about as real as a plastic Christmas tree. He’s been living the lie for so long, acting like ghetto royalty with his expensive sports jerseys and tough talk without having to undertake too much of the sordid business that finances his lifestyle. But when he’s got to walk the walk – he can’t “put somethin’ behind those words.” Even little Canard thinks he’s so feckless he can pull a fast one on him.

The look on his face when he’s faced with violence – Sherrod hitting him outside Cutty’s gym, his Mom slapping him, witnessing Michael’s beating of Canard, Michael’s punishment – is one of a terrified child. And that’s what is so easy to forget when you watch these middle schoolers navigate the broken world around them – these are kids. They don’t have the emotional tools and experience and vision to deal with these things.

That was a most powerful scene – in Cutty’s gym. Namond picking on Dookie to feel some of the toughness he covets, prompt Michael, the Great Protector, to call his bluff. Michael’s most unique power is how he forces everyone to be honest. He’s done it all season long. He only had to hit his friend two or three times to shatter any illusions Namond had left about who he is. Michael says nothing the entire scene. After all, it’s about actions, not words. Again, realness.

Funny how Namond chooses the same language that Cutty used last season when he quit Barksdale’s organization: “it ain’t in me.” But hey, he’s like 14, so what does anyone expect? The fact that it’s in Michael seems to be the exception, not the rule.

I have to give my props to Julito McCullum (Namond). He did a superb job in this episode. His character has the greatest range of the four middle-schoolers and he’s always believable. I would venture to say that he’s the best actor of the four, but they’ve all done a great job.

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A word on touch and intimacy. Dookie lets Prez drape his arm around him; Namond lets Colvin hang his hand on his shoulder, but Randy shrugs off Carver and Michael pointedly tells Cutty not to touch him.

That’s why the brief talk in Prez’s classroom about “intimacy” was so instructive. Here is this basic component to human relationships, and the children not only don’t understand it, they can’t comprehend the concept. That’s how deprived and depraved their homes are of basic family functions. They joke that “intimacy is about getting some” and Prez goes on to tell them about what intimacy means to him. He says that “intimacy can be a conversation.” But he can’t really explain it. Can you really teach something like intimacy in school?

Which leads us to the Dragon Lady’s great line, “I kept you in Nikes since you was in diapers.” It describes one of the great tragedies in the values of this community: the conflation of coveted material goods with love. The definition of intimacy, of love, that has taken root in this depraved community is purely material. Everything has to be tangible. Sex. Nikes. Lexus Landcruisers. An intimate conversation? Show me the money.

In this environment, since everybody values ostentatious wealth, you will too. And without someone to nurture the young girl student who asks Mr. Prezbo what “intimacy” is, she could end up as screwed up and morally twisted as Namond’s Mom.

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A great first scene. It seems there is a never-ending supply of abandoned buildings in Baltimore. Initially, I thought that they were going after him for being close to Randy after the last episode. I was on the edge of my seat. The fear that Michael exhibits in the chase make you think he’s running for his life. But Michael outwits Chris and Snoop and exhibits surprisingly good aim with a paint gun.

Still, this scene was perplexing. At the end of “New Day,” Marlo tells Chris that Michael stood tall for Randy. And the next scene we see is… Michael’s training? It doesn’t make sense. You’d think they’d discipline him or at least lecture the boy, instead of bringing him more into their organization.

It is still unbelievable to me why Michael always gets breaks from Marlo when no one – NO ONE – ever gets any. How does he tell off Monk, who is much his senior not to finish off Cutty? It’s not believable why he gets special treatment. Why would Marlo venerate a kid like him while treating all other human life as as disposable commodity as a paper towel? It’s a little incongruous if you ask me.

We’ve seen Marlo Stanfield now for about a season and a half. And we still never see him when he’s not doing business. I’m a little disappointed by this. That’s what was great about Barksdale. He had his club, his bar, his women. But Marlo and Chris and company don’t seem to ever have any fun. They lack a certain depth and roundness that Stringer and Barksdale had. Perhaps the writers were sick of pouring their energy into the street characters and felt that they had elucidated well the personalities and traits of drug dealers in previous seasons. Still, I would like to see Marlo flushed out more.

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One complaint I have had this season was well illustrated in this episode - the tendency to end scenes quickly. There’s never any lingering. When Landsman tells off Lester, when Bubbles discovers Sherrod’s dead body, when Michael bitchslaps Namond – the damage is done and the scene suddenly ends. They build up the scene leading to an insult, a tragedy and then – cut.

I’d like to see more of the reaction of these characters. Perhaps I’m being overly sentimental, but it couldn’t hurt to linger here for a moment on the character’s expressions. Watch Lester cuss a little bit, watch Namond cry more and try and hide his embarrassment. We saw all these for a microsecond. They did this earlier in this season when Greggs enters that house at gunpoint.

One could make a good case that, in this season especially, “The Wire” is now story driven as opposed to character driven. The focus is on the story as an aggregate, not on putting too much emphasis on its individual parts. It leads to a riveting television series but with many characters who feel like there’s more to them than you can see or ever find out.

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A superb last scene, when Carver walks through a brightly-lit hospital hallway as Randy mocks him. You could hear Randy’s voice the whole time, and you could see Carver’s face the whole time and it all spoke volumes. It felt a little bit, just a little bit, like a Kubrick film. Very powerful, very good television.

The amount of distrust people show for the system and the police is vast in this show. And you can see why people like Randy turn away from the system. What does he have left to believe in?

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And so what is next for the middle schoolers? History and the circumstances of the times have made these boys who they will be. A talented boy like Michael, with a fortitude that could enable him to be the next Barack Obama, instead will pour his smarts and energy into the drug trade in West Baltimore.

Dookie, Namond and Randy. I don’t know. But it doesn’t look good. But I can’t wait to find out. This show is just amazing, absolutely spellbinding and I'm sad that there's just one episode left.

But do check out this interview with David Simon:
http://www.slate.com/id/2154694/nav/tap1/

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And as always, random comments/observations:

- The scene with Bubbles talking to the guys in the stables seemed out of place. It just seemed incongruous that somebody like Bubbles would know folks who sweep up stables. I mean, c’mon, how many people are there in any city these days who work in stables?
- I loved Cheese’s line talking about the woman who jumped them. “This woman pulled a pistol out of her pussy. Shit was unseemly.”
- Wonderful scene at the bar between Lester, Bunk and McNulty. Bunk’s lines about J-Lo were hilarious. Great, great dialogue - “The Wire” does this better than anybody. Bunk can’t understand the drive of Lester. “You act like you’re on the trail of Pol Pot or some shit,” he says as Lester turns Chris's signature nail around in his hand.
- I watched this episode twice, parts of it three times. And I never caught the “that’s got his own” line. Never heard it. If I have one complaint about “The Wire” – and this applies to other HBO Series, namely “Deadwood,” it is that it is not always easy to understand the dialogue. But thank goodness for On Demand!
- Michael is supposedly getting better at boxing but the kid never uses anything but his right. Use your jab man!

Thanks again to all the comments last week. I definitely learn things and hear things that I didn’t hear or see from reader’s posts.