Monday, January 07, 2008

More With Less

“What kind of people stand around watching a fire?” – Haynes

And so, off we go…the much talked about “media season” – which was the subject of glowing write-ups in the LA Times and the NY Times Sunday – finally begins.

We know that this season is going to largely be about manipulation, particularly about how the media sets the public agenda by what they choose – and don’t choose - to cover.

The opening scene with Bunk (rewatching the Fourth Season, the opening scene usually does little to advance the plot, it’s all about setting the theme) was a harbinger of this: how do you manipulate the truth? How do you get the outcomes you want with the information that you have? As we’ve seen with how the institutions run on “The Wire, ”it’s not about truth, it’s about results. Everyone – from the cops, to the dealers to the journalists – has got to hit their numbers. You do what you have to, even magically turn a Xerox machine into a polygraph.

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Still, overall, I thought “More With Less” was one of the weakest of the five season premieres we’ve seen. The parallels between the police department and the Sun newsroom were too transparent. Unlike Season Four’s “Boys of Summer” which was mostly interested in the emergence of Carcetti and setting up Randy’s involvement in Lex’s murder, this episode had a bit of a didactic feel to it. There was a lot of repetitive, expositional dialogue in this episode, particularly about explaining the effects of budget cuts and demonstrating low morale.

We didn’t get a feel for too many of the characters at the Sun except the two cub reporters, the managing editor and Haynes. Rewatch “Boys of Summer” or “Ebb Tide:” we get a much stronger feel for the new characters of those respective seasons (four and two, respectively) than we got in this one.

It was difficult to tell the journalists apart, what their jobs were and what each character wanted. But of course, in a show as masterfully crafted as this one, I’m sure that patience will reward the viewer over the next few episodes. Haynes’ character was the exception: you get a good feel for what he’s about right away.

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The plot thread with Marlo appears to be promising. Despite his overwhelming brashness, his saving grace is that he is careful.

This quality has saved him from many traps that way with Barksdale and the police. But he is no team player. His petulant manners at the Co-op meeting and the look that Cheese gives him at the end suggest there will be blood between East and West Baltimore this season.

As Bunny tells Wee-bey in jail in last season’s finale, “there’s no code, no family, no trust” in the game today. Marlo is front and center on this. He’s the unfettered capitalist, ruthless and almost completely lacking in empathy. He has shown little in the way of hobbies (Dozerman’s remark), and is just interested with expanding territory and the bottom line. How it was before doesn’t matter.

Again, it’s all about results. He’ll short anybody and put someone in a vacant if they present only the slightest threat. It will be interesting to see if these qualities will give him more territory or if he will perish from overstretching himself too much. If this were a normal cop show, he'd of course fail and die a miserable death. But this is "The Wire" and it's nice to know that the ending won't be so predictable.

I’m not sure how Sergei, the Greek’s jailed henchman, will play into things but it’s good to see Season Two dragged back into the picture. This will be an interesting plot line.

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And yet, we still have the believers among us. “Promises were made and promises will be kept,” Carver says to the disgruntled men in the Western District. Daniels invokes Carcetti’s promises as evidence that things will change. Everyone keeps waiting for things to change, but political considerations and expediency always get in the way.

This theme, of the valiant underlings working their hearts out at the docks (take your pick), the corner (Bodie) and in the police (McNulty) while their superiors subvert them, gut their operations for political or financial considerations, has been present in every season. We can already see it on display in Season Five.

I just wonder, and hope, that there’s some expansion of this theme. I don’t think it’s merely enough to see it happening in the same way in a different sector of society. The theme has to be expanded or augmented somehow. We’ve seen plenty of superiors hijacking the hard work of good men on this show. What’s beyond this?

And some random points:

- Looks like Dookie has grown about 6 inches from last season! He towers over Michael and yet commands little respect. Michael doesn’t look any different though. Dookie still has that look of resigned sorrow on his face; the only difference now is that he looks man enough to do something about it.

- Carcetti looks doomed in a way. There’s not enough money and he’s unwilling to compromise with any element that could jeopardize his political future. And, all of a sudden, he’s worried about stats. He looks panicked in this episode. Norman is a great character, his political conscious.

7 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

I think you mean Norman, not Namond, as Carcetti's political conscious.

"Crime rate stays up and he's just another weak ass mayor of a broke ass city."

I think Cheese's look implies that he's more inclined to fall for Marlo's appeal to ambition more than Slim Charles was.

Marlo's clearly looking for a way to cause a divide in the Prop Joe camp.

I think it's brilliant how the ramifications of Carcetti's stubborn refusal to take the Governor's money are now the cause of all the trouble the city is now facing.

Somewhere, Clarence Royce is laughing.

8:24 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Namond is a great character, his political conscious.

You mean Norman?

8:25 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I'm surprised you weren't pleased to hear that the Daily Record scooped the Sun in the episode given your involvement with a smaller paper!

I agree with the other poster about the look between Cheese and Marlo - Marlo is testing Cheese, not just Slim Charles with his comments and it shows a manipulative side to Marlo.

Its interesting that you have characterised Marlo as careful. A poster on IMDb has a very different take on the character:

http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0306414/board/thread/94139831

Personally I'm somewhere between the two. I think he is smart and plans to avoid police entanglement where possible but is too merciless and ambitious to stay off the radar for long - from your other comments I see you also note that he is quick to kill. The Barksdales, particularly Stringer, had a better grasp of the link between murders and the police and Stanfield is too quick to kill for the most minor infraction to truly be called careful. I think his organization made a mistake in standardising the way they disposed of bodies for so long - the connection between all of their murders was made too obvious but it almost seems they have been let off the hook by the funding issues. Yet another heart breaker from the show!

Marlo is certainly still seeking to expand and I think he is actively pursuing blood from the East side so he can take over their operations. I took the scenes of Chris looking for Sergei as the beginnings of a Stanfield plan to usurp Prop Joes connection to The Greeks. Joe should never have allowed Stanfield to meet Vondas or have taught him how to get court house documents!

I agree that it is not the strongest premiere. I think the show is starting to sag under the weight of the huge ensemble cast it has accrued along with the shortened running time of the series. The factors of less time and more characters seem to have stripped some of the subtlety from the first 2 episodes but the show remains a treat in my book.

I don't think the institutional parallels were more transparent than those in season 1 - I think that as viewers we've become more attuned to this theme and recognise it more readily.

I agree that characterisation in The Sun newsroom was broad and that it was hard to get a feel for everyone. However, I disagree that this was much different in episodes like Ebb Tide, Boys of Summer or indeed The Target.

In the season 1 premiere almost everyone is introduced but only McNulty is presented as multifaceted. Daniels and Bunk also get a fair amount of screen time.

In the season 2 premiere Frank Sobotka is introduced and developed as a man looking to save his workplace. Nick and Ziggy are also recognisable by the end of the first viewing of the episode. Who else is from the docks? Russell features at the end of the episode finding the girls but has no lines and is not really a character at this point. Spiros and Sergei have little screen time.

In Boys of Summer they four boys are well established. In More With Less, our fifth season premiere, Haynes is established and characterised as are Templeton and Gutierrez. I'd say all the premieres do similarly well with introducing new characters on the first viewing.

It is one of the joys of the show that much more information is presented with each episode than can be digested but that the writing is careful to make sure the key points are picked up on first viewing.

On re-watching More With Less I was able to identify more than 10 different newsroom characters by name and realised that I had missed several things like not fully understanding all the jargon used and Haynes exposing an extra $20,000 dollars of campaign contributions during his conversation with Campbell. There is a lot to these scenes but its not all there straight away. And as you say, I'm sure we'll learn even more over the coming episodes.

Whiting and Klebanow, the bosses, do seem one dimensional after the pilot - I hope they will be expanded on a little. A scene with the Tribune company MD would be a good idea I think. It would humanise them in the same way as seeing Burrell at the mercy of Royce did earlier. However, I doubt there will be time for that. I think its reasonable to have the bosses of a single season remain unlikeable - Burrell was not humanised at all in the first season. Valchek is unrelentingly one dimensional throughout.

I also agree that the unrelenting fiscal crisis throughout the episode seemed heavy handed. However, having seen episode 2 I understand that they have to make things look really terrible to justify the decisions some characters make.

I thought it was a treat to see Carver doing well for himself again. Hes now matured into a Colvin/Daniels type figure. He is a capable leader, a principled police and is being shorted by those above him and shouted at by those below. Hes our hero middle manager in a new incarnation and Haynes is almost another iteration of this put apon character.

8:42 AM  
Blogger JAMMQ said...

I agree that HBO's decision to cut the show from 13 episodes to 10 seems to have fastened the pace of the first two episodes abit, sacrificing some wubtle detail and richness we normally would get.

Although, I dunno- I think we may be putting the show under our own microscope too closely-hoping it lives up to the unreal expectations we have for the final season.

9:42 AM  
Blogger JAMMQ said...

*subtle detail

9:43 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I agree that "More With Less" while good in its own right, it just doesn't quite compare to the strong introductions we've gotten in season's past. Each season's respective institution that was to be examined throughout the run really came alive in their debuts. Whereas with the newsroom, the vernacular of that world is a little harder to grasp and I often found myself lost.

However, I am aware that it is a habit of David Simon's to throw viewers into the world without much regard for their ignorance and I respect that. Anything else would be inherently false. But I'm sure as the media angle develops more of a context in relation to the whole that this season may shape up to be one of the best.

7:43 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Simon's take on his Baltimore Sun years and the reasons for his departure to television ----
http://www.esquire.com/features/essay/david-simon-0308?src=rss

5:25 AM  

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